Opening was really good and really well edited, however they said too much happened in the time we had and it was too much to follow.
Some things made our audience confused, for example adding in shots that didnt have any reason (walking towards and opening the drawer, but not seeing what was taken out)
Lighting kept changing throughout the clip (from light to dark)
Breaking the 180 degree rule (towards the end of the clip)
Music needed fixing (sounded like there was two playing at the same time, but not in sync)
Sometimes they could hear the camera (before I spoke on the phone)
Some noises needed to be louder as they didn't really understand what was going on (wind chimes)
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